Monday, 4 February 2008

Daily Spark Word: Ache

In celebration of my rubbish back and the fact that it has made me bed-ridden for the day, today's spark word is 'ache'. Enjoy!

ache

two women sit at a bus stop
one says
'i can't feel my fingers
or my toes'
the other says
'i can't feel my body at all'


5 comments:

Anonymous said...

How can I contribute my poetry on here? :)

The Unskilled Poet said...

You can either post your poem as a comment, or you can add a link to wherever the poem is posted.

Jim Murdoch said...

Growing Pains

When I was young I
regarded pain as
a rite of passage.

Now I am old I
realise where that
passage was leading.

Snakebite said...

hey unskilled poet, here's my much overdue comment :)... Just to let you know that this poem is really good. Short and to the point, and conveys the message very well...

Regards,
Snakebite :)

The Unskilled Poet said...

Cheers, Snakebite! Feel free to give the challenges a go!

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